Giving Him Amnesia Fixes Brambleclaw, 8 Year Old Me Can Confirm.

Giving him amnesia fixes Brambleclaw, 8 year old me can confirm.

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6 months ago

Transmasc Cupioramntic Shadowsight my beloved. Shadowkit purposefully playing around in the dirt so she looks more rugged like a tom my beloved. Supportive family who knew he was a little trans boy before him my beloved. Nonbinary cousin Thirftear and Agender spirit friend Hollyleaf smothering Shadowsight with support my beloved. Shadowsight post-ALITM yearning for the feelings Rootspring and Bristlefrost had but not being able to feel those with anyone my beloved. Shadowsight my beloved.


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6 months ago

Alright, time to explain my Warrior Cats au.

TPB Changes:

• Shadefang is a young Windclan warrior who is Graystripe's equivalent of Onewhisker, but they met before TPB began. Shadefang got with Doespring, who had one little daughter named Peppernose, who accompanied Crowfeather on his journey with the traveling group.

• Scourge and Firestar knew eachother when they were young. Scourge still takes a life of Firestar, but realizes it's his brother because of the red streak on his head and red on the back of his ears. He and Firestar end up joint killing Tigerstar, and Scourge becomes a Thunderclan warrior named Frostreed.

• Medicine Cat Ravenpaw named Ravenweb.

TNP Changes:

• Hawkfrost and Peppernose join as travelers with the journeying group. Peppernose comes out of this with a secret relationship with a white rouger she-cat named Snow, and Hawkfrost comes out of this with more good relationships and friendships.

• Tawnypelt and Feathertail become a couple, and Tawnypelt has her kits with the surrogate Apple, a sandy colored rouge tom who is the brother of Snow. They end up having Flamekit, Dawnkit, and Applekit, who become Flametail, Dawnstrike, and Appleheart.

• Tallstar chooses Shadefang as Windclan's new leader instead of Onewhisker. Mudclaw still has his rebellion, but ends up getting defeated anyways. Shadestar now appoints Tornear as his deputy for siding with him even when his brother Mudclaw was leading the rebellion.

• Bramblestar takes the fall for Feathertail and ends up getting amnesia from it. His fur becomes lighter and his eyes become yellow (think Bill Cipher possession yellow), and he takes on the name Bramblepath. He and Squilf become besties, they never become mates, and Ashfur takes the blame for parentage of the three. This also ensures that he doesn't mentor Lionblaze so THANK GOD

• A rouge named Tangle seeks shelter in Thunderclan with her tiny son after her mate Stone abandonds them in a harsh storm. This is set during Leafpool's Wish, and is after Leafpool brings the three to Thunderclan. The thing is, the three are now surrogated by Crowfeather for Leafpool and Nightcloud, so they are also different as well. The three are named Jaykit, Hollykit, and Goldenkit, who grow to be Jayflight, Hollycloud, and Goldenblaze respectively. Tangle becomes a queen, then to elder, named Tanglecloud, and her son is named Dustkit, who becomes Dustbreeze.

The arc really starts with the first book in Power of Three, which is now called Power of Four. Our protagonists are Jaykit, Hollykit, Goldenkit, and Dustkit. While Dustkit may not be related to them or even be of clan cat blood at all, they still basically see him as a brother, and Tangelcloud will often let them all sleep together in her nest just so they can cuddle with Dustkit. The usual stuff of PO3 is prominent in this book, but we get changes with the new POV, more focus on Midnight the Badger playing a big part in the prophecies of this arc, and adjusted personalities and stories of our familiar protagonists.

I'll see you when the book is ready.

10 months ago

So, I recently dug up an old Animal Jam/AJPW story from when I was 11. It was basically a cliche adventure/action/disney-esque love story where one of the 12 Phantom Kings kidnaps the new Snow Leopard Alpha, Jade, on the first Night of the Phantoms party. Basically, after that, they fall in love, Jade befriends a kooky little phantom who wants to become an animal like the Jamaalians, and involves a new weapon called the Phantom Crytsal that can heavily pollute an area it's placed in instantly, but is also infused with magic that can make anybody wearing it immune to Phantom King/Phantom Queen/Phantom Prince spells.

Would anybody be interested if I posted the chapters on here? It's a story I'm really proud of for how decent it was written at my young age and is also very consistent with Animal Jam and even AJPW lore. It also includes the adventures from Classic in a more revised way to fit the story, and it also gets more serious as it touches on topics like body dysmorphia, depression, grief, PTSD, and more tame depictions of slavery.

Anyways, if anybody is interested, please let me know!


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6 months ago

Y'know, it's funny that I have so much more changes and fun stuff in my Omen of the Stars part of the revision fic instead of the Power of Three section. This includes:

Ivypool (The only one I'm covering here right now)

• Briarivy. Briarlight joins Thunderclan as a 'paw with her siblings from Riverclan and bonds with Ivy and Dove. After Briar's accident, Ivypool is one of the main cats, along with Dovewing, to keep her spirits up. Then they get together, and Fernsong surrogates when they're ready to have kits. He also looks after the kits while the two do their jobs and be gay.

• She and Dovewing stay close. When their younger, they kind of look eerily similar, and some cats say they could be twins. They kind of come up with this mindset that 'twins are supposed to be close, and I care about you a lot, so I'll try my best to still be a good sister even if we have our differences.' This works extra better when Dovepaw convinces Firestar to allow Ivypaw on the journey with, making their bond solidified with fun memories.

• Going on the journey also means Ivypaw meets Blackpaw, a tuxedo cat Windclan apprentice who comes along on the journey to the beaver dam with his mentor Sedgewhisker because of a thing where they get to bring three cats along instead of two. They basically start being friends when Blackpaw is scared to cross a wet, slippery log, and Ivypaw, who feels bad for the scared apprentice, leads him along by her tail. After this, they talk a lot and end up being friends when they get home. They also train in the Dark Forest together and with that comes angst and tension and friendship.

• Ivypool forms a little friend group with Briarlight, Blossomfall, Dovewing, Blackheart, and Poppyfrost. They stick together and begin protecting the clans together, making up a sort of gaurd that you might remember the name of if you've seen a certain on the Disney Channel:the Lion Gaurd.

• Hawkfrost is not evil. He was a misguided cat who tried to help Brambleclaw atone for his actions and save Firestar from the fox trap Tigerstar's spirit set up, but Brambleclaw accidentally stakes him in the throat while trying to do it to his father. Hawkfrost trains Ivypool in battle moves, but makes her promise to always believe in the good in her heart and to be a good sister. This greatly helps Ivypool and Dovewing's relationship as it incentives them to stick together and figure out everything together.

I can explain more about the Omen of the Stars section and what the changes are/really would be if you guys want. Until then, see ya soon!

11 months ago

Warrior Cats Burning Suns AU Dark Forest

Before I touch on the allegiances and begin the fic, I wanted to touch on the part of the AU that's going to be important for the second protagonist:the Dark Forest, i.e. her home before Thunderclan.

Before the Dark Forest, cats like One'eye and Nettletail roamed about the edges of Starclan. Then Mapleshade came, her and her surviving kit being persecuted unfairly by Starclan. In her fathoming anger, grass began to die around her paws, a thin red outline graced her pelt, and her eyes turned black, with piercing yellow pupils. Suddenly, a dark and gloomy forest burst from around her, sending Starclan cats fleeing as the ground began to crumble and crack open. Beneath it, scorching molten fire split the ground apart, sending cats plunging into a firey second death.

One of these cats was Oakstar, who burned beneath the dying grasses. As he felt his spirit fade away, his essence began to gather. Many moons later, this essence would reform into another Thunderclan tom, to reform Oakstar's spirit in the light of reincarnation.

Meanwhile, the Dark Forest grew as the evil cats at the border began to flock to Mapleshade and her kit's new hunting grounds. In this forest, cats no longer aged, and Starclan could send the evil and vile cats to rot forever in pain.

Now, in the twisted and dark trees, organs of cats hang askew for all to see. Blood drips down the blackened branches, and charred remnants of leaves occasionally fall to the ground. Cats wallow in pain and suffering, avoiding the dark pools filled with blood and grime. Some say that large scaly creatures with claw-sharp teeth will grab cats and drag them into the depths, where they tear their bodies apart. Some also say that large water snakes swim in there as well, and will electrify the grimy water with lightning when they have caught their prey.

When you enter the Dark Forest in your dreams, the only way to leave is through a dark tunnel with a bright light at the end. If you stay in for too long, your real body will wither away into ashes, and your spirit will be stuck in the Dark Forest forever, your fur charred and burnt like the ground beneath your paws.

There is always the chance that you will slip through one of the cracks and fall into the molten fire. If you do, your death will be painfully slow, as Mapleshade has found a way to manipulate it to do so. All the while, the essence of twice dead Dark Forest spirits will taunt you and cheer as you slowly die.

Anyways, past the gory stuff, thanks for reading! The allegiances will most likely come out later today, but it may be tomorrow if I'm too busy.


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3 months ago

Warrior cats fans, check this out if you can help! Our warrior friends, twoleg and kittypets alike, need some assistance, so if you can do anything, then please don't hesitate to do it!

‼️ CALIFORNIA WILDFIRE AID AUCTION ‼️

‼️ CALIFORNIA WILDFIRE AID AUCTION ‼️

James L. Barry, former comic artist of the Warriors series, is raising funds for charity by auctioning this original page from Ravenpaw's Path. All funds will go towards repair and prevention efforts as a result of the California wildfires.

➡️ Link to the auction on eBay ⬅️


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5 months ago

Reblogging this to highlight the parts of the Burning Suns AU that might interest you cause the Bramblenesia one was described to the point for now.

• Sandstorm gets a wife. She's bisexual but has a she-cat preference. Firestar surrogates for her and her wife and becomes little Squirrelkit's and Leafkit's uncle. Even though they know he's their biological father, Leaf and Squirrel will always see him as an uncle.

• Lionheart lives longer. I wanted to see more of this guy while he was alive and see him interact with his children. He dies instead in Forest of Secrets, meaning Tigerclaw never takes charge as deputy, allowing to some changes and courses of plans.

• Ravenpaw is a medicine apprentice. He still witnesses Redtail's death and is extra broken, as with Spottedleaf as his mentor, Ravenpaw was able to get close to Redtail. Ravenpaw still escapes to the barn, but returns with Windclan as he misses his clan and duty too much to bare. He ends up getting a husband and a cool ass medicine cat name. He also might be a little Jekyll and Hyde-ish but that's for later. Also PURPLE EYES RAVENPAW FOR THE WIN

• Russetfur is Brick and Bone joins Thunderclan. He's mentored by Willowpelt and eventually mentors Ashfur. He also has a sister in Thunderclan and a very Thunderclan-connected past.

• Snowfur lives as Snowflower. She's a sassy elder who likes to tease her sister Bluestar, but she has a few secrets that are very Riverclan related. Could that add to why Whitestorm now has striped brown patches on his fur?

• Yellowblue for the win. THEY'RE GAY AND YOU'LL NEVER CONVINCE ME OTHERWISE. OakBlue was a past thing and Bluestar definitely still grieves his death, but more as a treasured friend and powerful ally than Riverclan lover.

• Brokenstar is now a medicine cat named Brokenhope. Brokenhope is also a girl like her sisters. Raggedstar is instead the evil Shadowclan leader that kills babies and probably cannibalizes them. Brokenhope is mortified as she knows Raggedstar has her adoptive brother, Runningnose, in his line of sight to erase.

• Shadowstar, or as she prefers, Tall Shadow, is the Spottedleaf equivalent to our second protagonist's Firestar equivalence. Redtail gets included from book two and beyond as our second protagonist gets closer with Sandstorm.

• Millie and Silverstream, now Silversnow, are sisters. Millie was taken in the summer by a twoleg couple and moved far away from the clans. When Graystripe meets Millie, he's shocked by how similair she looks to Silverstream, and they figure out that they are sisters. Silversnow gives Gray and Mills her consent to have another litter, as now that Graystripe was truly settled in Riverclan, he wanted a true chance to raise kits. Of course, I hate him, so his kits move to Thunderclan and Millie joins after Briarpaw's accident happens. Millie dies in Thunderclan like usual, Bumblestripe stays in Thunderclan to be with his husband Toadstep, and Blossomfall...well, Ivypool is with Briarlight, Dovewing is with Flametail, and I definitely don't want her to get with Thornclaw, so I don't know what to do with her yet, but I definitely think she'll find someone. Maybe Rosepetal could work since she wouldn't be crushing on on an already married man in this au.

4 months ago

Guys I made another oc insert warrior cats fic...

It's where the protags are Moonpaw and then her fucking red moon looking ahh sister Poppypaw. Poppypaw supports Moonpaw x Moonpool and the only reason she wants to save the Moonpool is so her sister can keep making out with it.

She's also a bit of a fucking idiot and kinda inspired off of Stanley Pines but she's my new blorbo along with Moonpaw.


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11 months ago

OH SHIT

Fuck I forgot to add a role to the allegiances and roles list! I'm sorry everyone, it slipped my mind and it is my mistake! I will be updating the roles and allegiances with this forgotten role, which also includes a forgotten cat with it! It's a special character I thought could be put to good use, but it completely slipped my mind.

Pls forgive me I'm really bad at remembering stuff


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