Y'all, Chapter 7 Is Kicking My Ass. I Had To Start Putting The Actual Plot In Here And I've Restarted

Y'all, chapter 7 is kicking my ass. I had to start putting the actual plot in here and I've restarted the chapter like 3 times because I can't get it to work with me.

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5 months ago

Quick,

I need a non awkward way to tell your mom that your best friend has moved into boyfriend status.


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8 months ago
Scene of a fight between Box Ghost and Danny Phantom. Box Ghost says "You will never defeat the ultimate power of cardboard pakages, halfa!". Danny, looking tired is in the middle of using his thermos. we can see random spectators and school in the background. one of the background characters has a shirt "Is it gay?"
Close up on the spectators, with valerie in the front. She looks confused as she asks "Halfa?". in the back stands sam and tucker.
Valerie sitting in her desk, with pencil case and notebook in front of her. She looks distressed, clutching her hair. There is floating text around her, as she thinks: "What does it mean? Halfa? half... Ghost + question marks. why. half of what? hybrid? made in a lab or? no. nope. nu uh. what. can ghost even be pregnant? No. no. Not thinking that."
in the left upper corner text "after truce with phantom". Clouds in the background. Valerie in her Red Huntress costume, sitting on board relaxed. She asks: "So which of your parents fucked a ghost?". Phantom, flying next to her with his arms behind his head, shocked, says "huh?"

i love ways the word 'halfa' can be interpreted

1 month ago

Chat, i am just now realizing that I did not include something very fundamental to my John design in my story.

It is time I throw myself off a river.

Anyway, i was going to do a better watercolor cause i don't entirely like how this one turned out, but I've kind slowed down on posting and figured why not throw it out.

Chat, I Am Just Now Realizing That I Did Not Include Something Very Fundamental To My John Design In

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6 months ago
Yall Learning All Those Space Facts For My Fic Has Turned Me Into A Space Kid. Call Me Educated

Yall learning all those space facts for my fic has turned me into a space kid. Call me educated


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6 months ago

Y'all, she's finally written. I just need to edit it and chapter 8 will be up


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5 months ago

Right and that could make sense. But I just mean, like he doesn't have to be in ghost form to use his ghost powers. So is it just him choosing to appear in one form over the other cause it helps him mentally? Or does his ghost form give him other advantages?

Y'all, i have a very important question

What does "going ghost" do for Danny other than change his body from human to ghost?

Cause it's shown many times that he doesn't need to be in ghost form to use his ghost powers. Does it give him the super strength or something? Like what does it do?

9 months ago

@any-n-everything Here's why i think Sam and Tucker needed some more thorough development. I mean it's not that they were terrible, and I think the majority of my problems with them suffer from the writing and it being a kids show who's primary goal was to teach kids moral lessons. But Sam had several moments where she disregard what Danny wanted and pushed her own agendas no matter how that affected him and Tucker. Such as the gorilla project (yes it was for Danny's grade but the poor kid got no sleep that night and clearly didn't want to be there), or the one that gets me the most is season 2 episode 1 when she wished Danny and her had never met and then instead of trying to solve the problem in any other way (she already knew at this point that it was the wishing ghost attacking) Like going to get help from any of the other ghost hunter or dealing with the ghost herself which she was shown very capable of doing (and we needed more of because honestly that was a cool aspect of her character) she decided to put her friend, who she supposedly cares about, through the most traumatic experience of his life a second time. She killed him, twice. Because she was the one who egged him on to go in the portal the first time despite him warning her about safety issues, and then she just shoved him in the second time. But then the show wants to convince me she likes him romantically. That's crazy. Not to mention the one time with the trucks that Danny and Tucker liked and she wanted him to use his ghost powers to her advantage despite having in several other episodes berated him for doing the same thing. And (last example I promise) in the show finale when he gave up his ghost powers to protect his family and go back to a normal life because he's been struggling with this for so long, she gets upset! (They all do, I'm not excluding Jazz and Tucker from this, this is just my Sam paragraph). She tells him that she feels she lost a friend and that he's wrong to give up superpowers because now he's not unique or special and she wants friends who are unique and special. Like damn, Sam. Low blow. It's like when a friend only wants to hang out with you to play on your x box and when you don't have the x box they disappear and hate you.

As for Tucker, he's not quite as bad and again I think his character just suffers from the Tv-Y7 rating, but there are a few times where he just straight up disrespects Danny. The only two times we're shown that they get in a fight, Tucker completely does a 180 and makes Danny out to be the bad guy. In the episode where he wishes he has ghost powers he just blames Danny for taking the spotlight and showing off how much better he is, when Danny never did any of that (at that point in the show). Even if Tucker felt that way because of jealousy, he was still really rude with how he spoke to Danny and quite literally put a citizen's life in danger just to upstage Danny. He does it again in the one for where he runs against Dash for class president. (I know that in both of these he was under a ghost influence, but all of the problems started before the ghosts got involved, they just enhanced what he was already feeling.) (And I know Danny and Sam weren't listening to him but that's wildly out of character for Danny and I feel the writers just conformed his personality to the plot to teach the listen to your friends narrative) but he also took that scepter willingly from the mummy ghost. He has like a weird superiority complex that he takes out on people at the most random times. Then in the episode with Nocturne, his best dream is him being all rich and making Danny his janitor! That's not how you think of your best friend! That shows just how much better he thinks he is compared to Danny. Then in the episode where the G.I.W. buys Danny's house and Danny is freaking out, Tucker is like hey man, you have a lot of money now, act like it and enjoy it and calm down. Then gets mad at him when he acts like it and enjoys it! And also he did the same thing as Sam in the finale.

Sorry for the chaotic jumbled mess of thoughts, I have more to say I just can't remember any more specific examples off the top of my head at the moment. But again, he could have worse, I just think they also deserve their own growing and learning moments.


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5 months ago

Okay so it's like an energy level thing? More powerful and easier to use in one form vs the other?

Y'all, i have a very important question

What does "going ghost" do for Danny other than change his body from human to ghost?

Cause it's shown many times that he doesn't need to be in ghost form to use his ghost powers. Does it give him the super strength or something? Like what does it do?

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