I Feel Like Burgh Is All The Weirdest Parts Of Bug Enthusiasts And Artists Concentrated Into A Fatal

Couple goals: Horrid beast tormented by voices, whose only choices are to witness/cause the death of their soulmate and a princess who’s doomed by the narrative to repeat the cycle upon their death.

2 of them

miss pauling likes hot moms pass it on

damn can you draw something else

Please please please some science party fluff it can be anything with them I'll be forever indebted to you

I prefer gentle surgery, but science party is cool too!! not great at drawing either of these nerds, but whatever,,,

could you draw demo and sniper chilling? (can be ship or not :D)

hey hey helloo :D!!!

holy fuck sorry for taking so long, this one was super experimental for me >_<, i really wanted to try drawing backgrounds and more dramatic lighting with this one, there's still a lot to improve but i'm happy ^_^

also since i love cross-faction stuff i obvs included that ^^

they sneaked out of their bases and drove far from them so they could hang out (tho obvs Administrator knows gjkhjh)

this one can be ship art or not (for me it is :3)

Thank you so much for requesting :D

(click the pic for better quality °▽°)

Burgh ! 🪲

Midge! Midge! Mentally strongest gym leader! Can't keep her down!

How To Avoid Plot Armor

Plot armor is when important characters seem to survive each and every treacherous obstacle that is thrown their way just for the sake of the plot. The readers know that your protagonist is important and won’t meet their demise because who else will defeat the bad guy in the end? This can result in underwhelming battle scenes, loss of suspense and an overall boring experience.

Here are some ways to avoid having your readers notice the plot armor (because let’s be honest, it’s there whether we like or not) or at least make it more realistic:

1) Injure your characters. Let it be known that no one is safe. During the heat of battle, the prized soldier loses his sword arm. The invincible superhero receives PTSD after witnessing a terrible event. Raise the stakes!

2) If they escape, make it believable. Did they sacrifice something to escape? Did a past experience give them the wits and knowledge to outsmart the danger? Justify your protagonist’s escape. Don’t make it an easy get away just because you need them out of the situation. 

3) There are consequences. Every action sparks a reaction. Have there be realistic push back. Your character shouldn’t be immune to the rules and laws of your world.

4) Detailed Explanations. So, your character needs their limbs, their sanity and anything else you could strip them of. How do you make it seem like they’re not immune to everything then? Equip them with what they need (knowledge, weapon, confidence, etc) and really sell it to your reader on how they survived. 

There’s no way a teenaged girl stakes a 400 year old vampire just by picking up a branch and defending herself. Equip her with some knowledge of vampires (fanfics to the rescue?), an ancient relic that she unknowingly wears around her neck and an insane amount of adrenaline… and maybe I’ll believe it.

5) Kill off other characters. Have their deaths affect the protagonist.

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