Angst n5 w/ Fives and Dogma?đ„ș
I was 100% worried I would not be able to write this properly. These are both characters I havenât really written- if anything I have barely written any of the clones. I love them, each and every single one. I just turn into this anxious mess of a ball that is afraid I am going to slaughter them with my words.
I have a lot of feelings about how Dogmaâs blind loyalty was used against him. He made many mistakes, but he was so painfully manipulated. He and his vodâe deserved so much better.
SO ONTO THE ANGST~!
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Iâm fine, Sir.
The blaster trembled, the kriffing blaster trembled in his hands. If he closed his eyes then he could see how each piece of it vibrated thanks to the shaking of his limbs. Krell was laughing at him. His vodâe were against him because he had been so blind, so painfully blind.Â
You ever think that the General knows what he is doing?
He had nearly dragged Tup down with him. He had followed along after the person he had thought he was supposed to trust. His brothers had cried out, lashed hard against the injustices, but he had kept his feet on the path he had chosen. Each footfall stained his soul.Â
Well I, for one, agree with the Generalâs plan!
Vodâe turned on vodâe. The sound of each shot rang in his ears as they fell like training droids. Broken, twisted, betrayed. They had raised their weapons against each other because they had been manipulated and yet his eyes still refused to see the truth. What the mind could see, the heart rejected. 212th against 501st.Â
Betrayed.Â
Dead.
I think youâre all overreacting.
They had been made for the Jedi. They had been trained for the Jedi.Â
They had been corrupted by the Jedi.
Unmarked graves lived in his mind and he told himself that the General cared. The General felt each of their deaths, rather like he felt each death. The Remembrance was growing longer as more and more of his vodâe kept marching on.Â
NO! WE HAVE ORDERS!
When he closed his eyes he could see Fives grabbing the blaster from his hands. He could see Rex smiling at him. The Jedi was dead. There would be no Remembrance for the monster that had played with them like toys. The vodâe, he realized far too late, always came first. Dogma knew he should have believed sooner, listened to his mind sooner, should have just done anything sooner. He had argued that the General cared, that he knew what he was doing, and the payment for that blind loyalty was genocide.Â
You were the biggest fool of all, Dogma.
âSo what happens now,â he leaned his head against the wall as he kept his gaze averted. He didnât want to see the heartbreak in Fivesâ eyes. His wrists sported new ornaments suited for his rank. Traitor. Jedi Killer. The Fool.Â
Prisoner.
âThey mentioned a trial, vod,â Fives sank down onto the bench in the hallway. A faint sound of discomfort or exhaustion left him. Dogma wasnât sure which it was, but he had to guess it had to do with the fact the war kept dragging on. He didnât even know how long his brother would be planetside, but he knew he was wasting time by being here with him. Time better suited for anyone else.
âI...did the right thing,â he whispered more to himself than anything. General Krell wouldnât have stopped, he would have just kept on using vodâe like cannon fodder because they were just clones. Clones were grown to die. Dogma hated himself, but what he hated most of all was how Krell had shaken his faith in loyalty.Â
âYeah, you did the right thing. We arenât going to let you go down for this,â Fivesâ voice was pitched low so only he could hear him. âDogma, none of us blame you-â
A dry laugh escaped him as he shook his head. The action made it feel like the very air was scratching at his eyes. They burned. âI blame me.â
âDogma, just listen to me-â
âForget it, youâre a fucking asshole.â His eyes kept on burning as his cheeks grew wet. If he kept his gaze averted, set on the wall, then neither of them would mention it. âYou shouldnât have come here. You should be with someone who deserves your loyalty.â
He had to push Fives away, had to push away any other vodâe that might show up. They didnât need to be corrupted by him. They needed to march forward without worrying about what he hadnât done fast enough. The sound of a fist slamming into the forcefield had him jumping slightly. His head lolled to the side and he fixed Fives with a look.Â
âYou deserve our loyalty! We look after our own, you bastard.âÂ
Dogma couldnât fight the sad smile that curled across his lips. âBut I didnât, vod, but I didnât.âÂ
I counted on blind loyalty like yours.
Cody- No one can survive a fall from that height Kenobi in the Rako Hardeen arc- *falls off a building and is absolutely fine*
Ok now you got me thinking on whether or not this is supposed to be a testament to how Obi Wan is too good at taking a beating.
Of course, there is the fact that the falling off the building thing was part of the whole âfaking his deathâ thing so I imagine he prepped how to fall in a way that looked really convincing.Â
But at the same timeâŠthe man could also just be super resilient.Â
And I donât know if I should be scared or impressed that Obi Wan was willing to fall off a fricking building and land on some really hard looking boxes to convince people he was dead.
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Since I spend an inordinate amount of time staring at Obi-Wan, I cannot help but noticed that he wears his robe differently from other Jedi. Granted, the Jedi's outfit are not identical but they has similar design. Obi-Wan, even though is wearing pretty much the same as Mace, has his inner robe collar higher and more tightly wrapped. This is remarkably different from when he was a Padawan/Knight, now that he is a Master. What do you think? As a writer, do you have any headcanon or theories?
Ah, my dear Anon, you have touched a nerve here!! Yes, I have noticed it. AND IT DRIVES ME INSANE. Prepare yourself for a ridiculously long reply (forgive me!!!).
(I feel the need to drop a disclaimer here, right at the beginning. I am a history nerd⊠like⊠itâs a driving passion. So please excuse any excessive shouting that takes place during this post.)
I think to begin we need to at least put into context what the Jedi costumes are modeled after. There are 2 major historical reference points for Jedi robes.
1. Tunics and Tabards worn by knights:
Tunics are worn under the tabard, and sometimes thereâs even an under-tunic that goes, you guessed it, under the main tunic. The tabard went over the tunic and was often split between the legs so the warrior could walk, fight, and ride a horse more easily.
2. The Japanese Kimono:
Holy crap, do you have any idea how hard it is to find a picture of a proper menâs kimono that isnât a bathrobe???? The pic I ended up finding isnât exactly what I wanted but I think you get the general idea. Fun side fact: the large belt worn around a kimono is called an obi :) How interestingâŠ
So, as you can see, the Jedi wear something that is a mix of these two historical vestments:
Youâre right, Anon, in The Phantom Menace Kenobiâs attire is really quite open and loose. Anyone else remember seeing Obi-Wanâs chest, because I certainly do⊠and I would like to see even more of it!
Well⊠I guess you kind of see his throat⊠but Iâll take whatever I can get.
Side note: Do you also remember how we got to see Kenobi covered in sweat?? Please donât tell me I was the only person who enjoyed that :)
Both Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon have loose fitting tunics and tabards that are open at the neck.
Can I take a moment to point our how utterly RIDICULOUS the size of their sleeves are??? It is COMPLETELY impractical from a fighting point of view. This is why vambraces and bracers exist!!! Please use them, Star Wars!!!
See, Dave Filoni gets it!!! They gave Kenobi some pretty sweet vambraces in The Clone Wars⊠because NO JEDI WANTS TO MAKE A FOOL OF HIMSELF BY GETTING CAUGHT UP IN HIS OWN MASSIVE BELL SLEEVES WHILE TRYING TO PERFORM ACTS OF HEROISM!!!!!!
For godâs sake, the sleeves are so fucking massive they actually billow in the breeze!!!!
Moving onâŠ
In Attack of the Clones Obi-Wan is suddenly super uptight and sporting a godforsaken mullet, which I can almost forgive in this scene because he is still beautifulâŠ
And in Revenge of the Sith Kenobi is practically swallowed up and choking on an INSANE amount of fabricâŠ
None of this is PRACTICAL!! WHY WOULD YOU GO TO WAR DRESSED LIKE THIS?!?!?!?!?! I mean, look at Ewan trying to get his sleeve on. He needs a bloody assistant to help him!!!
You know what? Iâm still not sure if this costume is brilliant or laughable.
Symbolically you can say that Obi-Wan became more set in his ways as he transitioned from TPM to ROTS, that he became more constricted by his beliefs and less able to stray from the Jedi Code. His costume develops more layers and thicker fabric and itâs bound very tightly around his throat. It looks rather heavy and stifling and suffocating.
However, if you take CW Kenobi into account, it kind of makes that transition from AOTC to ROTS a little harder to understand. Heâs less fanatical in The Clone Wars; you can see little moments of Obi-Wanâs conflict â thereâs a lot of âdo as I say, not as I doâ in CW Kenobi.
As a writer I guess I see his costume in 2 different ways. In ROTS Obi-Wan is a Jedi Master in his prime, wearing all the symbolic pieces of a powerful uniform. Itâs bigger and more imposing because he is bigger and more powerful than ever. However, he has been through incredibly painful experiences. And though he has remained true to the Jedi Code, the harder he clings to his ideals, the more suffocating and toxic they become. The very fact that his tunic creeps higher and higher up his neck makes me feel almost as if it were going to choke him.
Do you want to know why I think this costume might just be stupidity? The Jedi robes were an accident. Technically, Luke is wearing Jedi clothes in Return of the Jedi. He has a tunic and tabard, but his clothes are close-fitting and more practical for movement and dexterity:
Iâve read that at the end of Return of the Jedi, when Anakin appears with Obi-Wan and Yoda as Force ghosts, that was a last minute decision by the filmmakers and they did not have a costume planned. So they grabbed whatever fit the actor â a massive robe from a character that had lived on Tatooine. The massive robes that Obi-Wan wears in A New Hope were not necessarily meant to be his Jedi robes but rather meant as desert-appropriate-attire. Look who else is wearing them:
Iâm fairly certain his robe is actually a terrycloth bathrobe ^^^ LOL!!
Even baby Luke is wearing a Jedi-like tunic in A New Hope.
Honestly, though, either way, whether it was a mistake or it was deliberate, costumes in films are always supposed to tell you something about the character. So if youâve noticed that Obi-Wan is wearing his costume in a way that makes him different, thatâs done on purpose by the filmmaker and itâs brilliant that you picked up on it. Well done, Anon!!!
This is the longest post in all of history⊠goodbye for now. Sorry I rambled on for so long :)
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