I needed that 😩
I'm currently writing my first serious fanfic and it's probably going to be like 20+ chapters. I have so many ideas and they all start to interlace and form an interesting story.
The thing is, I have very strong visual imagination but I'm not that good with words (even though I studied literature - dropped out bc writing papers on schedule gave me lots of anxiety)
So anyway I would imagine the scene in my head in every detail. I can see the "camera" angles, the mood, everything. But when it comes to writing it down, I sit on ONE sentence for approx 15-30 minutes struggling to find the right words.
And then I'm all excited telling my friends I wrote 5 pages last week and one of them goes "That's not that much, I write 30 pages in two evenings"
Like, why would you say it like that? Why compare? Did you feel better? Bc I certainly didn't.
This is for the slow writers out there. Those who take weeks to write one chapter. Those who take years to finish one manuscript. Those who regularly write only 100-300 words in several hours. Those who take months to put out a new chapter. Those who haven’t touched their stories in years but it’s still a WIP because they can’t stop thinking about/taking notes for scenes/etc.
I see you. You’re valid. Keep up the good work!
Why not both? Why couldn't he be an intelligent, ambitious, rave-attending twink with dreams of freedom? Everyone was young once and I'm sure Silco knew how to have fun. Just look what he's done with The Last Drop 😂
And I'm saying this as a person who was a part of a leftist activist group during my country's authoritarian era. We worked hard but we partied even harder.
I can't lie, I hate when people headcanon young silco as some twink, like, he was practically the same person he is now except gentler and more open. Stop making him some rave-hosting, clubbing twink when he's an intelligent, ambitious young man with dreams of freedom 😞
Chaotic academia is
1.) Intense obsessions that last maybe two weeks but consume your soul
2.) Spacing out in class but loving to learn
3.) Swearing and slang while discussing deep academic topics
(Part of my Zaunite Viktor AU)
You know that feeling when you accidentally call your teacher or boss mom/dad? Yeah that shit's embarrassing lmao.
Also, what do you think of Powder's fanart? ;)
game over.
>continue?
8 and 13 with Brynjolf for your elder scrolls questions
What do they act like when they are sick?
Grumpy. As in “don’t touch me and leave me to die” sorta grumpy. He feels vulnerable when he’s sick and hates not being able to properly do his job. He especially hates getting ataxia. He almost blew his cover once trying to pickpocket someone in Whiterun. Sneezed on ‘em instead. He’ll never forgive himself for that, nor will he get that disgusted look they gave him out of his mind. Brynjolf will outright refuse to be babied by anyone while he’s sick, however he does fancy a nice bowl of hot horker stew when he’s feeling under the weather and would never reject it.
How would they react to being a Dark Brotherhood target?
Annoyed, frankly. Though not too surprised. He was a thief after all. Not the most popular guy out there. Assassins were not so different from thieves, though. And he’d no doubt try to sway the assassin’s attempt to murder him by trying to recruit him into a different sort of shady business that was much less messy. If worse came to worse, he was sure he could outrun them and good luck to them if they tried to enter the Ratway.
this is so accurate i-
david tennants so funny to me cuz hes like. a very private and quiet person. and all characters they call him to do are like mr slutty mcthot
I mean I just have to add a bunch of Astral Viktor to this because he's SO expressive
People: Viktor is not externalising his feelings, he's the master of microexpressions
Actually Viktor:
Okay I gotta talk about the Kuleshov Effect for a minute because I see a lot of people talking about how Silco and Vi were looking at each other on the bridge and it's got me scratching at the walls.
The Kuleshov Effect is a film editing effect. It is a mental phenomenon by which viewers derive more meaning from the interaction of two sequential shots than from a single shot in isolation.
In other words, the way a movie or show is edited influences the way you think or feel about it. This kind of subtle manipulation is very powerful and is used throughout film and television to guide the audience's emotional journey and can be used to influence characterization and plot just by putting things in the right order. When people talk about "unintentional implications from the writers" I have noticed several times that the cause of the unintentional implication actually being the editing, not the writing.
On the bridge just before the opening credits of episode 8, we have two perspectives: Vi's perspective and Silco's perspective. Rather than show what Vi's doing in one long sequence, and then switch to Silco's perspective in one long sequence, the editors break these sequences into smaller shots and inter-cut them.
The most common use of intercutting like this is when shooting dialogue: cut to one character, cut to the other. Because of this, to our minds, this sequence looks like they are having a silent conversation, but they aren't. They can't even see each other.
Silco can't see beyond the smog, flood lights, and oncoming parade of enforcers, and it's safe to assume Vi can't see past these obstacles either. They have no way or reason of knowing the other is observing the bridge.
So, now that we know they can't see each other, let's look at what happens if we reorder the clips so these are two distinct sequences rather than one long one.
The sequences on their own are not staged the way a conversation would be staged, because both characters are in the centers of their respective frames.
Vi is looking at the bridge where her childhood friend was about to fight her sister so she could get away. The last thing that happened on the bridge that she knows of is another bomb going off, just one. She doesn't know if Ekko or Jinx are still alive. Maybe she's wondering if she should have stayed instead of leaving Jinx again.
Silco is panicked and caught off guard by his own reaction. He has a moment of emotional vulnerability while his back is turned to his employees and while the enforcers are still too far away to see what's happening on his face. He steels himself before standing up, and faces down the enforcers before walking away.
So, why edit this scene this way? If they can't see each other, why make it look like they can? Specifically because they wanted these characters to have an emotional exchange, but can't, because they are physically too far apart. Vi and Silco only get two scenes together and they only talk directly to each other once. This helps fill in a hole where we want these two to interact, but plot-wise it makes no sense for them to be able to. The editors change the entire meaning of both of these sequences if the emotions on their faces are a conversation.
What I like about this is that it gives you two options for how to interpret this, and both can be true at the same time. You can look at each sequence on its own, and you can look at it the way the editors were manipulating you into seeing it. I do love what they've done here, and I think it's important when analyzing media to know what tools and techniques the creators have used to tell their story and be able to deconstruct their little tricks to inform your interpretation.
Anyway thank you @sweetestsixshooter for reminding me I wanted to write this down lmao
i think more male characters should have a little boob window actually
she/her, 28, ENTP, 7w8, nerdy bisexual mess. I open Tumblr twice a year to repost my current brainrot related things only to disappear again
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