Last Line Tag
Tagged by: @oros-ash3s
Oo I just started a new story.
So this is currently the final paragraph of the prologue for this new story, though there is definitely more to be done for the prologue.
"Her soul is slipping from her, and she can't gather enough strength to hold on. She can feel herself going weightless, her muscles no longer responding to her. She soon stops feeling her body, her consciousness going with her soul."
Tagging: @rumeysawrites @aalinaaaaaa
Reblog if you're a writer who re-reads their own work for funsies.
I will read at least 90 percent of it.
Listen to? It will reach my ears ig.
that "OKAY SO" before someone u love starts infodumping........ most blessed feeling in the world
So I've written fanfiction in the past. MHA fanfiction, Jujutsu Kaisen, other anime that are currently slipping my brain. So I was thinking... there is one MHA fanfiction I've written (and abandoned) with an absolutely brutal scene. The MC, in the second chapter (Or maybe third? I frame it as second.) of his story, gets brutalized. A major part of his quirk gets ripped off/out. He has wings. you'd think I should put had, but he has a second quirk and it's all fine. But the point is, I was exploring what I am willing to do to my characters. I was exploring how far I would go in an attempt to ruin the life of my own characters. How much detail would I put in a scene that I don't usually write.
Just a forewarning, the scene is describing a major injury. Blood and limbs getting ripped off level violence. If people are interested in the scene, I will hide the scene, naturally, but this is for the possibility of people voting yes who don't like scenes like that.
I've lost so much sleep over this thing. Three days straight of going to bed after eleven.
Though the cutest part might be the hole in the tree
Hello!
Hello! What brings you to my asks?
Thanks for tagging me, @illarian-rambling , even though I have barely anyone to tag. This is the first time I've been tagged on Tumblr. Hope I did this right.
Rules: Post seven sentences of what you've been working on (:
The forest is alight with life, the rustling of leaves, and chatter of animals. The trees sway in a soft breeze, creaking and groaning as some limbs are stressed by the weight of leaves and wavering in the wind. Within a small clearing, a young girl sits, her eyes closed as her silver hair sways in the breeze. Her head is tilted down, her lightly tanned skin glowing where beams of sunlight hit her skin. At her side is a sheathed sword, her left hand resting on the sheath. She takes a breath, raising her head.
"Elders of the Clan, I make a request!"
This is a new story. That is all the context I will give. Honestly, I have no idea how to do these things. So I'm not even going to tag anyone because I am an uncertain bean.
(Do not take this as a "I did not want to do this." I would love to do these things in my tiny little corner here. I just won't tag anyone.)
(This is potentially a serious story. Potentially.)
OO a tag! Thanks, @aalinaaaaaa
So I don't have folders for my WIP, kinda. I have a notebook and a collection of templates from the writing site I write on that I slowly fill out. Anyway
Within my notebook!
Stars Of The Sky
God-named
Ancient Gods
A bunch of pages dedicated to individual gods
Template collection (That have a few things filled out)
Characters
World
Yeah I don't have much. This doesn't include the main document, and what things I do have filled out aren't complete. However, I have thoughts on various things for this story. I also have a pronunciation guide, but don't know why anyone would want to know how I think names should be said (Like Hades' family line, Ariea, is said Ah-ree-ah. I doubt anyone can see it, but it is not said the same as area.)
If we looked at Sightless... Well... there's the document it was written on? I did nothing planning wise for Sightless.
WIP Folder Tag
Thanks to @ruvastuon for the tag!
The premise is to post all the headings under the folder/section for your WIP, and people can send asks for the titles that interest them!
For this, I'm going to go a little left field. In the past, I've presented my Scrivener files for this game.
But for today's edition, you're getting the headings from my notebooks! Two of them, in fact ๐
One of them is for any time that I know I won't have my laptop with me/otherwise in easy reach, such as the train or on holidays.
The other is my notebook. Story ideas go into this one, including ones that are dripping in spoilers for a book that doesn't truly exist yet!
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The Fancy Paperblanks Notebook (The Prose and Pieces notebook)
A Deal With the Ancients
Limbo
A few scribbled lines
Writemas โ Day 22
Another errant quote
No Good Choices
The Crow's Gift
The Forest's Disgrace
The Swans' Departure
The Markings of the Raven
The Temple of Verelise*
Alycja's ceremony*
The walk home*
A Deal and A Proposal*
Dinner that night*
A Conversation on the windowsill*
Ard na Preaghaun*
If You Must*
*These relate to the first redraft of Obsidian Sapphires; A Healing for the Birds is redraft #2
A Brush with Fate
Stir into life
Before the Blue Embers
Upon the Precipice
The Royal Council meeting
The Highest Bidder
A Promise to Keep
The New Status Quo
A Question for a Question
Star-Crossed (including a deleted starting paragraph!)
A Broken Seal
The Next Stage of Pilgrimage
The Chase for the Chalice
A Wish in Exchange
(Cerigo's perspective of the above scene)
A note
An unfeatured paragraph
A Conversation in the Aftermath
The first of the interrogations
Interrogation #2
A Prelude to the Questioning
The Third Interrogation
An Important Visitor
The Fool's Deal
A tidbit about Ruadhรกn's house
The Notebook I bought in Lidl (The Notes and Ideas notebook)
The meshaika
Background events of the Temple Chaos
The aftermath
The moment the friends vanished
A note on the High Councillors' strategy
The purpose of Morilast's Mark
What's the story's core?
Aileste
Eshani's manor
Claudia's manor
The central ballroom
Naimorste
Seldaikan mages and how they define magic
Alycja's career desires
Cerigo's stance on the aftermath of Chapter Two
For A Healing for the Birds unless otherwise stated
A comparison of the two balcony scenes
Throwaway ideas
The plot (Chapters One to Three)
Shifting of the Guard (happens towards the end/after Soulswapped)
Some major questions to be answered
Eshani and Claudia's response to the events of Chapters Two/Three and a bit beyond
Alycja's dilemma over the Chalice
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There's a few more entries after this, but they relate to Chapter Four/onwards-ish of A Healing for the Birds, some notes on a potential sequel (they're on the aftermath of the end of the first one!) and what Cerigo told Cheyoria after she came home the night of the ruined ceremony. Extremely spoilery stuff (ask if you want, but maybe do it off-anon or in a private message ๐๐ )
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Anyway, I'm going to put an open tag to see everyone's wip folders, and also send tags to @nightmaricwriter @seastarblue @willtheweaver @bardic-tales @finickyfelix @yaboiii-azzy @thatndginger @winterandwords @wintherlywords @jev-urisk @writingamongther0ses @avrablake @ark-inkweaving @oros-ash3s @bloodlessheirbyjacques @space-writes @thebookishkiwi @vesanal
3 and 6 for any character?
I'll answer this for... Hades and Eros
[3] What emotion is the hardest for them to deal with?
Hades deals hardest with love. Primarily, familial love. She sees her aunt and uncle as family, but she doesn't love them as much as she feels she should. It isn't like falling under their care was unexpected to her, but it's more due to the culture of her Clan, as she comes from the main tree of the family and her aunt and uncle are considered to be the offshoot, which leads to emotional distancing. She doesn't recognize romantic love easily either, but she recognizes it better than familial.
Eros struggles most with hate and anger. Not for any particular reason, mostly because he is so open and friendly with others that hating them or being angry with them is hard for him to imagine.
6] How direct are they in conversations, do they speak in hints and riddles or bluntly say what they think?
Hades and Eros are similar in that they speak their minds, but that is about it, I think? Hades is much more direct and blunt, and won't leave anything to interpretation, while Eros will say most of a thought then let listeners interpret the rest.
I know her skin looks tan, but that's mostly because I hate trying to make skin color accurate.
Also, I made these years ago. The sitting pose was stolen, I think? Obviously, her design has changed slightly, but the overall look is there. One is cropped to hide her name because I can.
My main oc has me bsing my way through blacksmithing...
Anyway, she is a lovely, tall young woman who finds a passion in being aggressively protective of things, like her family or a village/community. Her narration reveals that she sees herself as disposable, which is also why I make a certain narration choice with her that becomes quite apparent initially. As her view of herself shifts from negative to positive, she starts seeing herself as a main character, which shows in the narration style.
She has a power she despises despite using it when she needs to--on animals, not people. She got traumatized the one time that happened. She covers her eyes due to her power, although she can still see. It's just that a thin cloth prevents her power from harming others. Anyway, her senses are extremely enhanced because of her power, leading to her narration mentioning her hearing sounds and such more often than not.
She got used by her birth world, which led to her fleeing and living in the woods for a year (which, in her world, is equivalent to two of our years). After which, she is brought to her chosen world. She's my little baby.
My mood is balanced somewhere between "I should write until three am so I can sleep a good four hours" and "I should attempt to make a pinterest board for Hades"
Neither will go well.