They End Up Painting Her As This Really Stalkerish, Kind Of Nuts Female High Schooler Obsessed With A

Holy f shit I watched A Whisker Away. The storytelling was… lacking, for a better word. Literally. It was so… lacking.

Holy F Shit I Watched A Whisker Away. The Storytelling Was… Lacking, For A Better Word. Literally.

Like, it was trying to do a lot but couldn’t handle it. The whole narrative felt kind of fumbling, like an outlined script that didn’t quite get cleaned up.

Not only that, but the protagonist is…. Troublesome doesn’t cover it. She’s a red flag. She stalks Hinode, enjoys being touched by him even though there is no consent there and does the same to him, doesn’t really consider his feelings when acting, etc etc.

Some scenes really really IrKEd me, or rather, disturbed me. There’s a particular scene where Hinode touches between her legs (as a cat). And the expression they give her is just … I have no words. The protagonist is a literal child!! A CHILD! Wtf script writers????!!!

They end up painting her as this really stalkerish, kind of nuts female high schooler obsessed with a boy she only knows because she stalks him.

….

Not only her as a character, but the whole story’s writing and pacing was waaaaaaY off. What were they trying to do? Say ‘oh even if you have it bad, you gotta appreciate the human experience’????? I don’t even know where to begin with that….

They say that her mother abandoned her, but no actually no, because later they show she didn’t. Sort of??? It seems like they werenmt even sure what to do with the other characters to make her struggles seem genuine. She has a stepmother who she has lived with for years and has always tried to care for her and communicate with her, but Muge hates her for no reason apparently????? She also hates her father even though he is barely in the f movie and is barely mentioned??? What even are her struggles that she wants to be a cat so badly???

None. None really, because the writing did a terrible job of actually trying to portray them. She ends up coming across not as a relatable young girl who has a deep crush and wants the boy to like her and has trouble at home but she tries to be happy anyways; she comes across as entitled, stalker, obsessed girl who’s detached from reality and willing to do anything (even knowing the consequences) to get what she wants.

Wow. I could go waaay deeper into this. But in summary: this. Is. Not. A. Good. Movie.

Good animation doesn’t compensate for bad writing.

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Little background I did for my media, including youtube, tumblr and ko-fi. I think it looks super nice :), it is like the second background I draw. I think it’s not that bad, right?

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1 year ago

everyone: what's your goal in life?

me: to write a story so soul snatching, so gut wrenching and so devastatingly beautiful that it leaves you crying at 3am when you have a 8am lecture/shift and it inspires people to write entire essays, to write entire fanfics, mood boards and playlists based on it.

2 years ago

I’ve been wanting to be a writer since I was nine, when I sat down and wrote my first story (I made drawings for it and was very excited haha).

Since then, I’ve evolved a lot, having up to 24+ novel ideas in my mind and written down that I want to write.

And now I’m taking the decision of writing one of them for real, starting with the 3rd story idea I ever had, the first idea I ever had with real potential to become a great thing.

I’ve decided to take it seriously now, because I realize I’m not getting younger. If I don’t do it now, when the hell am I going to? Just fantasizing about getting published or noticed by an editor but not doing anything to make that come true, WON’T make your dreams come true magically, with 0 effort from you.

I’ve Been Wanting To Be A Writer Since I Was Nine, When I Sat Down And Wrote My First Story (I Made

So, I’m currently writing the first version of my first fantasy novel Initiation, in wattpad, with some illustrations! After I’ve finished it on there, I’ll self-publish it on kindle and ibooks with extra parts and the real illustrations with color and extra deets and quality!


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3 years ago
Crayola Sketch ✨✨✨✨✨✨🌺

Crayola sketch ✨✨✨✨✨✨🌺

Again cuz I frikin love it.

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2 years ago

Is it just me, or is tumblr infested with bots recently?


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3 years ago
I Think This Is One Of My First Digital Art Original Pieces That Is Completed, And I Mean Original As

I think this is one of my first digital art original pieces that is completed, and I mean original as in not fanart.

I’m so happy with this one, I didn’t even have to use references for the pose, just for the flowers! 🥺🤧😭 I’m so happy with how far I’ve gotten, and I hope to keep learning.

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1 year ago

So based on the internet this is the consensus on the atla live action series:

So Based On The Internet This Is The Consensus On The Atla Live Action Series:
So Based On The Internet This Is The Consensus On The Atla Live Action Series:
1 year ago

Aand ao3 is back!

Go appreciate writers and volunteers!

Aand Ao3 Is Back!

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2 years ago
Mystical Town. Urban Sketches. #7, Set Of 10.
Mystical Town. Urban Sketches. #7, Set Of 10.

Mystical town. Urban sketches. #7, set of 10.

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