Do you think that readers mom would threaten Bruce (if they were still together) to leave him during the time Tiffany was still around? I like to think that readers mom is like ‘☺️’ this and super sweet, nice, etc and when someone mentions Tiffany she’d be like this ‘😒’.
um no so i think you might’ve missed the part in chapter one where i mention readers mom is dead. additionally, readers mom and bruce were a one night stand- they didn’t have an actual relationship! great idea tho!! sorry i should’ve been more clear 💕
Are there going to be anymore interactions with Ariel and the rest of the friends?
Also will the princes mentioned in chapter five play any part in the story in the future, like do they have any importance to the story.?
One last question will the rest of the batam eventually find out what reader did on their holiday in chapter 5?
Sorry if that’s too much, I just really love your story.
No you're good babes! There will be more interactions with Ariel fs! they wont be too frequent but they'll be there. About the princes.... I'm actually not too sure! I was gonna ask for you guys opinion! Yes the batfam will find out what happened on holiday and they WILL freak. Thank you for the ask <333
What would happen if Ariel is actually a boy :D, like you know, how would the Batfamily react to that, and found out that Y/N tricked them and made them think Ariel was a girl?
It's just a silly thought I had, anyways, I love your story! you are a great writer!😺💞
BYE THAT WOULD BE HILARIOUS!!
unfortunately i alr made Ariel a girl!!!
I'M IN LOVE WITH THE STORY!!! AHHHHHH!!!
It's so good and you're doing amazing!! Please keep up the great work. I can't wait for more to come. Also, Damian??? Hello??? Um, yes, actually, we can punch you and just leave. And we'd do it again! The audacity of saying we can't get payback for everything he's done to us. The entitlement is crazy.
NO LITERALLYYYYYYY! like sir?? you're lucky we didn't do more tf?? he's such a baby tbh
ALSO THANK YOUUUUU
when i want fluff/angst fics and all i’m getting is smut
the struggle is real
Damien: * stops sending pictures of him and Tiffany having “family time” together to reader*
reader: LMAO guess he finally found out!
nah fr LMAO
Cant wait for Tiffany to be like "Damn cant believe you all fell for it *laughs*" kinda reveal if that's how it goes
yesss it's coming upppp
Me, a Turkish citizen: casually opening the yandere batfam tag, reading the first fic, only to find it was a yandere sultan fic after reading the first Turkish sentence and going back to read what you typed.
All jokes and shock it gave me aside, it was so good thank you for blessing us🙏🏻😭 I used to be a historic maniac but quit during middle school, Ig it's my sign to go back to it😭
BYE IM SORRY 😭😭😭 IK ITS AN ASSHOLE MOVE TO PUT TAGS ON SMTH THAT DONT DESCRIBE IT BUT I WANTED PPL TO SEE IT AND I DIDNT KNOW EHAT OTHER TAGS TO USE! i also had a history phase tbh! it’s what inspired this! anwayyyy i hope u like it! and that i didn’t butcher the turkish too bad 😭💕💕
I keep rereading "This is me trying" and I have a questions.
Did the Family set the dinner up as a test? At least, once Reader was late getting to the dinner. They had assumed she would run, not fight, and then they'd have an excuse to get rid of her permanently.
Or, on the other hand, the one time Reader isn't watching over the maid kitchen is the time the Family gets attacked? Perhaps Reader was, accidentally, guarding the one entrance no one expected. Maybe even the one entrance that was guarded? But the Family doesn't believe in coincidence. So they put together 'evidence' of Reader protecting them. (Reader asking why a maid was being shady. Closing the door when one purposely left it open. Or any other thing that Reader views as common sense that the Bat Family sees as directly protecting them, especially if outside cameras of the same timestamps show mobilized groups.)
(Hell, maybe the maids waited until Reader was obviously not showing up because they like her?)
I also am wondering if Bruce immediately tried to change Reader's school, or if he forgets he never enrolled her in Gotham Academy?
It'd be kinda funny for Duke or Damian's to search their school for Reader, only to realize she was never there. They just thought she had been good at hiding for years. The two question it, but don't say anything to Bruc. And then they see her as the captain of the cheer team of a rival school they're going against. Gotham Academy loses to Gotham Public and everyone goes wild.
But Duke and Damian, and anyone of the Family that came to watch with them, notice how the Football team acts towards Reader. When they try to confront Reader about it, Reader laughs at them.
Or maybe, when Bruce does try to enroll them and give Reader the Wayne name, and the Reader gets told, she rushes to get re-enrolled in her school? She scrubs the Wayne off her name and goes on like usual. Which gets her dragged in front of Bruce by Tim.
When confronted, Reader tells Bruce, "You said I earned the name Wayne. Because I showed loyalty and a willingness to protect you at all costs to myself. Correct?"
"Yes."
"Why would I want the Wayne name?"
"Excuse you?" Tim interjects incredulously.
"None of you have ever shown loyalty towards me. I haven't even been living in the Manor. Most of my stuff has been moved out since I was 11. I only come back because I hoped that I could have a family in any of you. I hate coming back. I hate staying here. I rarely ever do, unless I'm called back by Alfred for one of your parties that I'm not even allowed to show my face at. It's the one time that I don't 'sit guard' in the maid's kitchen that all of you got attacked. I could have left you to yourselves. I was tempted."
"So." Bruce leaned back in his chair, fingers digging into the arms of his seat. "Why didn't you?"
"Because, I didn't want you to die. I may not trust you. But I am loyal to you, even if it's only to the extent of caring whether you live or die. Something you've never directed towards me. Why would I take the Wayne name when you've never done anything to win my loyalty? You already know I'm loyal. But I'm not loyal to you the way I could be if I considered you family."
"You'd kill for us. You'd sacrifice your life and die for us. But you do not consider us family?"
"I didn't come to your gala to begin with because I was with people I consider family. The blood of the covenant is thicker than the water of the womb, after all. The bonds I've forged with others will always be stronger than the ones I carry out of obligation. I'm not even on your insurance. I've been getting medical care from back alley clinics or through the people who decided I was worth caring about. For now, I'm an easily disposable tool to you. As a tool, I don't want your name. It'll only cause more issues."
"Issues? What issues could you possibly have being called a Wayne?" Tim cut in again.
"A lone and very disposable Wayne, with no support system, no underlings, no money, and very little power. One would think this is you trying to get me killed or trafficked. A mutt in a den of wolves."
"Alone and disposable. That's quiet the statement, (Y/N). What makes you think that?"
"Years of me being loyal. Of trying my best. Of desperation to simply be looked at as more than a burden or the daughter of a whore, as you all love to call my mother. You have shown, time and again, that I am not worth any amount of loyalty. Why should I trust you? I know you don't you trust me. You only trust I'd die for you. Kill for you. Why would I live for you? You have never earned it."
And goes to walk out like a badass. Only to pause at the door, as Bruce and Tim are staring at her in stunned silence. "My name is (Y/N) (L/N). And until you can earn more than my loyalty, I refuse to bear yours."
Reader's face breaks from being just as stone cold as Bruce's, revealing a soft smile.
"When I first came to the Manor, I wanted to be a Wayne. Not for money or power. But because I loved my father, on the principle that that was what he was. My father. When I finally realized you'd never see me as a daughter, I stopped seeing you as anything more than a sperm donor. Earn being my father, or stop pretending you want me to have your name."
Ho is you a mind reader?
No they definitely didn't do it as a test, Bruce would never willingly put himself in a position where he's vulnerable and have his family 'rely' on Reader, even if it's just a test.
Ok so, for the maid thing, ur on the right track!! I don't wanna spoil too much so i'm not gonna say anything!!!!
Also Bruce kinda just forgot about reader going to school period, and you're so right about the WHOLE school thing!! it's like you took it right out my drafts LMAO!!!
You predicted a lot of future chapter plot points ngl but with the whole Bruce and Reader confrontation, you wrote it really good but thats more IBLD reader vibes! This reader is more scared of Bruce, she won't outright challenge or disobey him, she knows better. This version of Batfamily is darker and crueler than IBLD bc they're not heroes. Also, reader is 15, she's not gonna talk to the Godfather of the American mob like that, father or not! This was beautifully written though!! Thank you so much ily <3333
Zionists will try to pretend americans can't possibly understand what is going on in Palestine. That WE are the ones projecting. Fools, we see right through yalls bullshit because it's the same bullshit our ancestors pulled you fuckin numbskulls. Israel is just trying to do what settlers in "america" did to native americans. Only they are flopping so hard because they are trying to do what was done in the 18th century in the 21st century. It wasn't right then, it's not right now.
There is no justification for genocide. You cannot target civilians. You cannot target schools, hospitals, humanitarian aid. You cannot restrict humanitarian aid. You cannot deny people living on the land for thousands of years their homes. You cannot remove them from their homes. You cannot arrest them indefinitely without justification. You cannot greenwash Palestine. You cannot pinkwash genocide. You cannot hide your bloody hands by spewing lies. I can see and hear at the same time and I am no fool to your denials.
Israel must topple and Palestine will be free to self-determination and those who are capable of living alongside those with a different life can continue to do so in peace with equal rights for all. There is enough pie to go around. Palestinian freedom is not jewish expulsion. it is not antisemetic to criticize israel. it is not antisemetic to say free palestine. stop conflating things.