jack who thinks he's suave but his idea of flirting is shadow boxing and bantering
davey made cookies :) loosely inspired by an @incorrectuksies quote
Writing advice from my uni teachers:
If your dialog feels flat, rewrite the scene pretending the characters cannot at any cost say exactly what they mean. No one says “I’m mad” but they can say it in 100 other ways.
Wrote a chapter but you dislike it? Rewrite it again from memory. That way you’re only remembering the main parts and can fill in extra details. My teacher who was a playwright literally writes every single script twice because of this.
Don’t overuse metaphors, or they lose their potency. Limit yourself.
Before you write your novel, write a page of anything from your characters POV so you can get their voice right. Do this for every main character introduced.
If anyone’s looking for any good newsies fanfic authors here on tumblr, here’s a list of a few of them:
@saveugoodmadam - the resident Crutchie expert, his writing is amazing and makes we want to cry /pos
@loiteringandlurking - Javey. What else can I say? Seriously though, his fics are top tier, I always love reading what he writes
@pigeonwit - I wish I could write 50% as good as he does, I’m not even kidding. Like, where did all this talent come from
I will likely add more to this list as time goes on, but seriously you should check out these amazing people’s stuff if you want to read good fanfiction
(Also sorry if it’s weird that I tagged you three, since I only know one of you well, so sorry about that)
it's time for me to come clean guys ............ im a ralbert truther ... I don't get the sprace hype ......... why spot .... ralbert is just so much better ..... dumb x dumber ......... but also chaotic x has the chaotic one on a leash ....... but ALSO smart and strategic race and 'ill fight my way through them' Albert ......
so many possibilities .......... fluffy kony moments or angsty Albert gets into another fight or race spends too much time at the races or they fight because race is trying too hard to micromanage Albert and help him out .... ralbert > sprace
me when i got finch in newsies !!!!!! my friend got specs. here is our shitty tier list for fun, don’t come at me. THIS IS FOR SHITS AND GIGGLES!!!!!
Inspired by the random thunderstorm that just popped up out of nowhere. Enjoy.
💧Rain - What's the most emotional scene you've ever written?
❄️ Snow - Who is your coldest / most stoic character and how do they express themselves (if at all)?
🌨 Sleet - What's the most you've ever written in one sitting?
☀️ Sun - What's your favorite part of your WIP?
🌫 Fog - What was the hardest part of your WIP to write?
🌬 Wind - What was the easiest part of your WIP to write?
🌪 Tornado - Who is your most impulsive character and why?
🔥 Wildfire - Who is your most emotional character and why?
🌌 Clear Skies - How long have you been writing your current WIP?
☁️ Cloudy - What inspired you to start writing your WIP? (or in general)
⚡️Lightning - Have you ever spontaneously added something to your story that you wouldn't have added normally? If so, what made you do it?
🪹 Drought - What do you do to help with Writer's Block?
💦 Flood - How many WIPs do you have?
🏝 Hurricane - Do you often stick to one WIP and finish it, then move on, or do you bounce between WIPs?
🪨 Landslide - Which WIP has the most worldbuilding?
⛰ Earthquake - Which WIP has the least worldbuilding?
🌊 Tsunami - When and where do you like to write?
🌋 Volcanic Eruption - What's your biggest flaw as a writer?
🌈 Rainbow - What do you think makes your story unique / stand out?
🌙 Eclipse - What's the most common / reoccurring theme of your WIP(s)?
race: truth is, i only know one truly platonic relationship.
race: you and me.
albert: don’t make me laugh, race. you want to hit this so hard.
why do my tumblr mutuals not understand they are the hottest smartest lovable funniest most groundbreaking people alive 🙄
he/him media enjoyer • roman/rome • australian, 17 • javey&ralbert centric • always down for a chat !!
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