I’m Writing A Parody Of Stronger Than You With Clover And I Need Help.

I’m writing a parody of Stronger than You with Clover and I need help.

I’m reposting this to Tumblr to see if the Tumblrinas have any advice. I’m writing a parody right now of Stronger than you with Clover. It will be for the Genocide route for the fight against Martlet. Anyway I have two versions of a line and I don’t know which one to go with.

The line is replacing,

“I am their mercy,

I am their vengeance,

I am determination.”

For the version I’m working on, Clover will be referring to Monster kind, as opposed to people they care about like Sans did.

Version A is:

“I am their Judgement,

I am their Reaper,

I am their Condemnation,”

Version B is:

“I am their Judgement,

I am their Reaper,

I am their Retribution,”

I know it’s only one word, but the power of that last line is what I consider to be the most powerful line in the whole song, so I NEED to get it right.

I originally picked the word “Condemnation” because it rhymes with “determination,” no one ever uses that word anymore, and it has a double meaning. It could mean Clover is condemning the monsters for their actions, AND that they’re condemning them to a life forever trapped in the underground because they’re taking the human souls when they leave.

But then I listened to the Undertale Yellow song “retribution,” and started having second thoughts. Retribution also fits well in the same spot and if I use it, it will be referring to Clover’s retribution against the monsters and be a fun song reference.

I LIKE BOTH FOR DIFFERENT REASONS. Which one should I use?