Don’t mind this post being on Wisdom when Vengeance already came out school is a lot okay-
So in a previous post, I mentioned how I was a little disappointed by the end of God Games. It came down to a combination of my expectations for the Zeus “round” versus the reality and some (well thought out) posts I read in my frazzled I-survived-the-wisdom-saga-livestream state critiquing Zeus’s character in Epic. I’m not going to go into more details than that for now.
While I was grappling with how I felt about God Games and how that impacted my thoughts on the Wisdom Saga and Epic as a whole, I started thinking about what I would have done differently, or what I would’ve liked to have seen done differently, in God Games. And this exercise turned out to be pretty fun and helped me with my thoughts and feelings about the actual God Games. So I decided to share some of my thoughts with you!!
So for my thought-scenario, I wanted to change God Games, but not drastically. I didn’t want to change any gods in the games or even alter how it ends. I just wanted to figure out how to tweak it just right. And I think I figured out the key: more time!
God Games is long by Epic song standards- at 5:19, it’s the longest song in the musical so far! And there’s one small word in the published song that’s distinctly different from the drafts Jay’s posted- Zeus’s “and me” versus “or me”. I have a small theory that there was originally going to be more to the song, that Zeus was going to be the final round instead of Hera. But that part likely got scrapped due to how long the song was/could’ve gotten. But hEY, THAT’S JUST A THEORY; A MUSICAL TH- I’m sorry I’ll go see myself out
So for my little re-imagine, the primary thing I’m doing is leaning *into* the length of the song! Make it longer! Honestly I was expecting more of an 8 minute song here and I’m impressed by Jorge’s ability to condense it all but still make it easily follow-able.
First change we’re making- turn that “or” back into “and”! There’s no choose whom to convince situation here, Zeus is clearly the final round.
Moving swiftly forward to Apollo and Hephaestus! Both of these verses are great on their own, but for this I’m thinking we extend them by just a couple extra lines.
Perhaps Apollo doesn’t need more convincing, but he says an extra quip towards Athena to sort of pay homage to the Odyssey, where he’s also watching over Odysseus (I think, I’m not a Greek mythology or Homer expert). Something like…
Apollo: “You’re not the only one who’s watched over him” ;)
Athena: “… Thank you.”
Apollo: “Release him!”
Or something similar. Hephaestus, now, I don’t have any specific ideas on how to make his verse longer, but I’d just add a couple other back-and-forth lines before he says to release Odysseus.
Aphrodite and Ares were perfect. They were great, I love them. Athena could potentially have an extra line towards Aphrodite about how, even though he missed his mother’s passing, if he’s released he won’t waste another second to get home to the rest of his family he loves. Not entirely sure how to condense that into a witty verse, but there ya go 😅
Hera!!! Hera’s… is perfect. I can’t see any good way to stretch it out, and I love how succinct it is. So leave that verse 100% as-is.
Now for the big one- Zeus! In this version of God Games, Zeus is the final round, so Athena hasn’t won yet. The verse even starts with Zeus instead of Athena. I’d pay homage to the original Odyssey again here, and have Zeus ask Athena why she desires to go against the fates, which is what ultimately landed Odysseus on Calypso’s island in the first place (by spiting Poseidon’s son and the cattle incident, even though it wasn’t Odysseus who killed the cow in the first place) (once again, not an expert, I’ve read this part of the Odyssey only once, so I could be forgetting/misremembering some details).
Athena may reply with something like “he’s paid his fair due, he deserves to go back home”, and also challenges(?) fate as to leaving Odysseus on Calypso’s island for such a long time. Athena’s and Zeus’s lines in this part are longer than most of the other gods’ lines in their verses.
Alternatively, instead of saying “fate” is what led Odysseus to the island, it’s Zeus’s divine punishment to Odysseus for the mistakes he’s made on the voyage home, and for the cyclops and cow and all the crew who died. In this case, Athena is (in)directly challenging Zeus’s authority on the matter. Maybe there’s another couple lines back and forth here, but it winds up to Athena directly calling Zeus out for Odysseus’s pain and demanding that Zeus release him as he’s suffered enough. And *thiiis* is what sets Zeus off.
I imagine his lines here are pretty similar to the ones he actually sings, but tweaked (obviously) to fit this new situation. Something like
“You dare to defy me?! To make me feel shame?! Your foolish pride is what will make you LOSE MY GAME”
I’m not entirely sure on the pride line, I know there’s something in Greek Mythos about pride/hubris being a solely *human* thing, something that the gods just don’t have problems with? But on the other hand, to Zeus this is Athena rising above her place and defying his authority, something he needs to put out right *now*. What would it be if not some sort of pride? (Obviously it stems more from Athena’s friendship with/care for Odysseus but that’s not gonna factor into Zeus’s perspective)
And from here on, the rest of the song goes as it was. Thunder bringer, the flashback, Athena standing her ground, and her making her final plea to Zeus.
And those were my thoughts on how I would expand God Games and fit a whole round with Zeus in it! I had a lot of fun coming up with this reimagining, and it’s actually helped me enjoy the God Games we got more too! I’m always blown away by how musically Epic(TM) the songs are every time I listen to them and the voice acting is absolutely phenomenal. Maybe God Games didn’t go the way I originally expected it to go but it’s a great piece of work, and I like seeing the depths of character Jorge’s able to convey in each song- even with Zeus!
And the biggest moral of the story for me is to not browse tumblr until my brain breaks the morning after a saga livestream. Good lessons, good lessons.
If you’ve made it this far I hope you enjoyed my God Game ramblings and could see a little bit of my vision with expanding the length of the song!
Also no Athena’s not dead, it’s not denial, it’s called foreshadowing with Calypso’s line and the fact that Athena doesn’t even get *close* to death in the Odyssey- I know Epic’s a loose adaptation but there’s no way Jay would deviate *that* much and kill her off, if Athena’s actually dead I’m gonna flip out probably I’m going to be *so* upset—
Days 15-21 of my snarky sarcastic side speaking quotes from my page-a-day calendar!!
The calendar is taking quotes from the @ unspirational Instagram account by Elan Gale.
Jan. 15:
““Morning people should all be”— OI!!”
“Look *I’m* not the one writing this script!!”
“I’M NOT DOING THIS ONE!!”
“Well, I don’t know what to tell you!”
“FINE! I’ll do my own!!”
“How about this one- people who like staying up until 2 a.m. should all be in prison!!”
“HEY—“
(The original quote reads, “Morning people should all be in prison.”)
Jan. 16:
“Your Instagram followers feel bad for you.”
Jan. 17:
“The best things in life are completely out of your price range.”
Jan. 18:
“At least a broken clock is right twice a day.
Why can’t you be more like a broken clock?”
Jan. 19:
““I spend sixteen hours a day dreaming about the eight hours a day when I’m asleep.””
“Actually, I don’t sleep.
The others here sleep, but I don’t.”
“I do enjoy when they get to sleep each night though.”
Jan. 20-21:
“Your ex upgraded.”
(Yes I know, it’s the same pose as 16, I’m tired TvT)
WhOOF HAS THIS WEEK BEEN A WEEK. But I had fun with quite a few of these doodles!! I wonder who those others are
I’ll see you next Sunday (hopefully not so late) for next week’s batch!
Just wait until you hear about the Axiom of Choice
The maths fandom is wild. “Real” and “imaginary” numbers? I think you mean canon and non-canon. You guys seriously go “this is my number oc his name is i and he is the square root of -1” when in numbers canon lore it’s actually impossible to square root a negative but sure whatever. “Complex numbers”? I think you mean a character x oc ship. “f(x) = 3x - 5”? That is self-insert fanfiction.
Day five of my snarky sarcastic side speaking quotes from my page-a-day calendar! This time featuring a special guest-
“Manifest in one hand.
Poop in the other.
See which fills up first.”
The calendar is taking quotes from the @ unspirational Instagram account by Elan Gale.
My snarky sarcastic side collaborated with my friend’s impulsive side for this one. :3 They don’t have a tumblr account or I’d @ them here. To see more of their artwork, you can check out their red bubble here: https://www.redbubble.com/people/JessaKinney/explore?asc=u&page=1&sortOrder=recent (ITS ALL REALLY GOOD ART THEYRE A REALLY GOOD ARTIST (shameless friend promotion))
Have a happy Sabbath!! 🌄
Days 10 and 11 of my snarky sarcastic side speaking quotes from my page-a-day calendar!!
“Let your dreams go. They might find someone who can accomplish them.”
“Anxiety is just your body’s way of preparing you for all the terrible things about to happen.”
The calendar is taking quotes from the @ unspirational Instagram account by Elan Gale.
I did it! I’m caught up! Not that I was terribly behind. Got the first doodle done in class today and man, someone’s getting owned on the other end 😆
I kind of gave up caring much about making today’s doodle look nice. It’s been a long week and I’m tired and these are mostly for me to relax and scribble, so I’m gonna relax and scribble.
Also as a note she has no idea what she’s talking about where anxiety’s concerned, she’s not the anxious one in my brain xD
No no, I think it *is*, the notes might be a little different but it’s *definitely* there. I didn’t know about the Circe turning Scylla before this post (this is definitely making me want to brush up on my Greek mythology) but OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS HOW IS THIS MAN SO GOOD AT FITTING MOTIFS LIKE THIS INTO EVERY CORNER OF EVERY SONG— there’s just so many wonderful Easter eggs to find in this musical and I am LOVING IT
WAIT HOLD ON is that Circe’s motif at around 1:48 of suffering? When “Penelope” is talking about Scylla?
I can’t really tell, but if it is, oh my gosh!! That would be amazing and add yet another layer to the song! After all, in several versions of myth Circe was the one to transform Scylla into what she is now!! That would be a really neat Easter egg if it was-
Day 9 of my snarky sarcastic side speaking quotes from my page-a-day calendar!!
“I won’t even walk a mile in my own shoes.”
The calendar is taking quotes from the @ unspirational Instagram account by Elan Gale.
*WHOOF*. Today was a rough one for me. Unfun classes and laptop problems. :/ But I managed to scribble a doodle in time even so!
I knew what kinda pose I wanted to draw when I read the quote. This is the first one where she isn’t smiling! Also yes, those are compression socks :3
My favorite Disney princess is mister jalapeño anyway
Days 29-31 of my snarky sarcastic side speaking quotes from my page-a-day calendar!!
The calendar is taking quotes from the @ unspirational Instagram account by Elan Gale.
Jan. 29:
“You should hear what Mondays say about YOU.”
Jan. 30:
“Yes, I’m late.
No, I don’t care.”
Jan. 31:
“Never trust a person who smiles the same in every picture.”
Decided to still post this on Sunday even though this was technically finished in the middle of the week. And man, what a rough week it has been. But it’ll get better next week (I hope).
As I mentioned in the last post, I’ve decided to make these daily doodles a solo January thing to better focus on school and all my other responsibilities. If a calendar doodle strikes my fancy in the future, I’ll likely make it and post it here, but they won’t be a regular weekly thing anymore. (Not to mention I’m running out of different general poses to use =^=)
This was fun though! I got to draw many snarky faces.
In light of recent events with the Ithica Saga stream, I’d like to share this song of encouragement for us all.
Jeez I hope this link works the preview keeps showing my wrapped
My mom and I were going to watch the stream together but since it didn’t happen, we started watching the Wisdom Saga stream instead. And when it got to We’ll be Fine, I thought “huh, this is a good message for us right now.” Hope if you see this it gives you some encouragement ❤️ and Happy Holidays!
Day 3 of my snarky sarcastic side speaking quotes from my page-a-day calendar!
“If you find a taco on the ground, eat it.
This is a gift from nature.”
The calendar is taking quotes from the @ unspirational Instagram account by Elan Gale.
Now, my snarky sarcastic side personified also happens to be the one who cares about my physical health so she also had to make this public service announcement-
“… please do not eat a taco you found on the ground.”
I figured at some point the quotes would turn to something she wouldn’t actually say, but I did not expect it to be a quote like this that started it out 😆
Hope you’re all enjoying your 2024 so far. I finished this sketch earlier today but once again didn’t post until the night. Ah well. Maybe one day I’ll post earlier.
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