Storyshift Neue Rough Draft

Neue & AU Variants: Clothing Rough Draft Pt.3/6

Here is the clothing rough draft of Nova, Bernard & Carter.

Nova

Bernard

Carter

The problem child this time was Nova, just couldn’t get any good ideas regarding clothes, I figured warm puffy clothes could work since space is cold.

Bernard & Carter were a bit easier since I just based their clothing off mafia attire. I was debating on drawing Carter in a flapper-like dress, but it just would match her personality.

Here is the rough draft of one of the alternate personalities for my OC. She is a dog demon, specifically a Rottweiler.

This is personality is definitely the fighter of the personalities, has a lot more bite than bark. Much like the stereotypes of a Rottweiler, she’s very aggressive and hostile towards most. However, she does have a soft side towards very few friends.

She is somewhat sensitive, in a sense that it’s easy to make her angry. While she doesn’t regret her actions, she does think if she went too far in physical fights. Many view her as a perfect guard dog and could be a good bounty hunter if not for her temper.

Here is the rough draft of one of the alternate personalities for my OC. He is a dog demon, specifically a German Shepherd.

This is personality is best described as a disgruntled cop/detective, who will do anything to solve a case. He’s basically a stereotypical detective: clever, perseverant, thinks outside the box, and definitely has problems with alcoholism and smoking. Imagine those old black and white detective shows combined with Sebastian Castellanos from the Evil Within.

He’s not the most social person, however he knows how to get someone talking through drinks and persuasion. He tries to gather as much information as possible before making consequential decisions.

Finished/Colored Lineart: Roman

Here is the finished final draft for Roman:

Also here’s the lineart for just the body as well:

Here is a height comparison chart for my Welcome Home OCs

From left to right, the names are: Phil Love, Rosy Love, Henry Humble, Nilanie Saturdae, Bobbie Honeybunch, & Susie Sonyachuk.

“Choose Wisely…”

***TW: Stained/Old Blood***

“One weeps tears of truths…”

“The other screams laughter of lies…”

Madame Fuocella: The Blazing Siren

Madame Fuocella is the Overlord over the Opera industry and is part of the Theatre Overlords lead by The Puppeteer.

She was born in Naples, Italy and into a high-status family; she grew up during the Risorgimento or known as the “Unification of Italy”. Due to her childhood and being constantly praised by the male population, she had developed a princess complex.

Her family were able to visit several famous opera houses throughout Italy and France, seeing the fame, glory, and even compassion from the singers, she wanted to become an opera singer. After performing in more local theatres, she started to get recognized by many composers. Seeing this as an opportunity to boost their status and income, her family decided to build their own opera house for her to perform in.

During one of her performances, she made met a man. After finally meeting, and getting to know each other better, they both fell in love and got married to each other; a year later, they had a daughter.

However, when returning home, she saw someone who looked like her husband with another woman. Filled with rage, she waited until the woman was alone, and then confronted her. In a fit of rage, she attacked the woman, strangling her to death.

It was soon discovered that her husband has a twin brother, and that was who was on the date with the woman. The twin found the body and immediately blamed her; however, her husband defended her.

One night, she brought her daughter to her family’s opera house to show off her singing. However, the twin knew they would be there and covered most of the opera house with kerosene. After they entered, the twin locked them inside before lighting it up. The building started to collapse on top of them, crashing and killing the daughter. She was caught under the rumble; eventually experiencing a slow and painful death by burning alive.

After arriving in Hell, she was greeted by The Puppeteer, who watched her many performances when she was alive. The Puppeteer offered a deal to her, they would enhance her voice to draw her audience in, a “false” daughter who will always be with her, and the power to control any soul she owns during any performance. However, in exchange, her soul is owned by the Puppeteer, having to follow their command when needed. Wanting to gain back her fame and her “daughter”, she accepted The Puppeteer’s deal.

Many would willingly sign over their souls just to perform with her, let alone be near her. She has a rather flirtatious and egotistical personality, thinking that everyone wants her. If anyone tries to ignore her, she’ll throw a temper tantrum and basically push herself onto said person.

After hearing about Charlie and what she’s trying to accomplish at the Hazbin Hotel, she at first thinks of it as nonsense. However, believing that if she can get “redeemed” she could see her real daughter and husband again, she’s waiting to see the results before making a rather big decision.

Design

Her name is a rough combination of the Italian words for “Fire” and “Bird”.

She’s around 11ft 8in, making her a bit shorter than Zelyezda.

She has the appearance of a bird, specifically a phoenix, to represent how she died and how she’s rising up.

Her feathers can burn like fire when angered, but she constantly feels warm like a fireplace.

The necklace and bracelets represent “shackles” during to her being under The Puppeteer’s control.

She lacks wings like a typical bird demon, with her arms resembling talons. However, her full demon form looks similar to a griffin minus the mammal counterpart, or simply a four legged bird.

Here is a basic reference without the clothes and makeup:

Neue AUs Headshots Rough Draft: Neue

So I’m working on doing headshots for the different AU variants of Neue.

I’m mainly want to work on the head/facial areas of the characters, & figure out how I want their appearance (hair, eyes, horns, ears, etc.) to look like.

I’m going to do 2 headshot rough drafts each character: one with a simple hair/horn design & one with a more detailed hair/horn to match the goat breed they’re based on.

Here is the first rough drafts of Undertale Neue, the original:

For reference regarding the hair, horns & ears; he’s based of the Angora Goat (Picture not mine, found on Google):

I don’t know if it looks like it, but I was trying to give him curly hair since the wool coat looks curly to me (I also had to look up what mohair was).

I’m going to be changing the eyes to normal pupil lights instead of the goat pupil, since it looks more “natural”. However there will be a few characters that will still have it.

On a side note, if y’all want to hear “headcanons” for Crimson(Horrortale Neue), Vani(Dusttale Neue), Sabon(Something New Neue), or Gisha(X-Tale); please leave a comment.

Why is Mabel Standing like That?

Just sketching out a rough draft with Mabel, I’ve been trying a new rough draft technique.

Basically I stick figure the general pose that I want, then I highlight the “body” & then use that to create the outline. I definitely like this technique vs the one I use to do (which I’ll still use for more detailed work).

Oh look, Mati’s there too!

I’m currently working on my Hazbin Hotel Character. I have a basic rough draft of her body, but still trying to figure what she should wear.

Like I explained in a previous post, she has Dissociative Identity Disorder, or Multiple Personality Disorder. Now I don’t know how disorders/illnesses from previous/earth lives work in Hazbin Hotel, but I imagine that it would transit to Hell with the sinner, or changes to a more extreme/supernatural version of it that could effect the sinners powers.

This character has 7 alternate personalities, excluding hers, which are physically attached to her by chains. Below are the list personalities with their “personality traits”, what limb they are attached to, and what dog breed they are.

Main Personality

Sex: Female

Dog Breed: Golden Retriever

Characteristics:

Friendly

Gentle

Kind-Hearted

Naive

Proactive

Selfless

Limb Chained: All 7

Personality 1

Sex: Female

Dog Breed: Cavalier King Charles Spaniel

Characteristics:

Affectionate

Clingy

Loyal

Masochist

Overthinks

Touch-Starved

Limb Chained: Chest

Personality 2

Sex: Female

Dog Breed: Pomeranian

Characteristics:

Energetic

Ignorant

Outgoing

Quick-Witted

Reckless

Talkative

Limb Chained: Left Ankle

Personality 3

Sex: Female

Dog Breed: Rottweiler

Characteristics:

Aggressive

Anxious

Impulsive

Rude

Temperamental

Violent

Limb Chained: Right Ankle

Personality 4

Sex: Male

Dog Breed: Poddle

Characteristics:

Bossy

Cowardly

Dramatic

Fussy

Pompous

Self-Centered

Limb Chained: Waist

Personality 5

Sex: Male

Dog Breed: German Shepherd

Characteristics:

Aloof

Blunt

Headstrong

Irritable

Protective

Serious

Limb Chained: Right Wrist

Personality 6

Sex: Female

Dog Breed: St. Bernard

Characteristics:

Caring

Comforting

Compassionate

Nurturing

Positive

Supportive

Limb Chained: Left Wrist

Personality 7

Sex: Male

Dog Breed: Border Collie

Characteristics:

Charismatic

Detail-Oriented

Intelligent

Manipulative

Patient

Sadistic

Limb Chained: Neck

I’m still trying to figure out names for these personalities, along with backstories. If anyone has any ideas or suggestions for improvement, please comment.