THIS IS SO REAL THATS WHAT IM SAYING

THIS IS SO REAL THATS WHAT IM SAYING

Just remembered another thing that I find irksome about the comic outside of the obvious, so apologies for this second rant!

There are so many actually interesting plot points that Rusty has written within Leasebound, and then proceeded to do absolutely nothing with. And that really bothers me. I think what makes it so bothersome in that Rusty has gone on record to say that her story is meant to be about "interesting female characters" and like-

They aren't. Because you don't actually write about them outside of making them deal with the horrors of women who have more body hair than outside of their legs.

It generally prickles my pruddles the amount of times that Rusty has actually written parts of the lore that have substance, and then cooked them into nothing burgers.

Jaden having immense guilt over her fathers death, both because there was nothing she could do about it, and because she eventually dropped and gave up on her objective of going to medical school and becoming a doctor in his memory?

Nothing burger. I don't think we've literally ever come back to this plot point since it was introduced

Just Remembered Another Thing That I Find Irksome About The Comic Outside Of The Obvious, So Apologies
Just Remembered Another Thing That I Find Irksome About The Comic Outside Of The Obvious, So Apologies
Just Remembered Another Thing That I Find Irksome About The Comic Outside Of The Obvious, So Apologies

Riley and her turbulant relationship with her family, specifically hinting to the idea that they flat out disowned her/don't associate with her anymore?

Nothing burger. I don't believe we've ever circled back to this plot point either. It was hinted at in the first few chapters and in behind the scenes of the original story, but I haven't seen it mentioned outside of that

Just Remembered Another Thing That I Find Irksome About The Comic Outside Of The Obvious, So Apologies
Just Remembered Another Thing That I Find Irksome About The Comic Outside Of The Obvious, So Apologies
Just Remembered Another Thing That I Find Irksome About The Comic Outside Of The Obvious, So Apologies

The turbulent relationship with Karrisa and how she feels unwelcomed with her relationship with her boyfriend, because of her family's past traumas and distrust of men due to said trauma?

I'm taking a wild shot in the dark that they're likely never going to come back to this. And if they do, it's not gonna come back in a particularly satisfying or good way.

Nothing burger. And that sucks! Because this should be the shit that should actually be expanded upon! These are good avenues in a story to explore, and she just does nothing with them!

Just Remembered Another Thing That I Find Irksome About The Comic Outside Of The Obvious, So Apologies
Just Remembered Another Thing That I Find Irksome About The Comic Outside Of The Obvious, So Apologies
Just Remembered Another Thing That I Find Irksome About The Comic Outside Of The Obvious, So Apologies

The saddest part about Leasebound as a concept and comic is that it actually has so much potential to get really interesting, but Rusty does nothing with what ACTUALLY makes it interesting in favor of acting like she's stuck in the 2016 anti-SJW era.

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OH RIGHT, fair warning, ddt's unhinged sooo have fun

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6 months ago

Still wild that people got mad at a woman for punching another woman in a "who can punch" harder contest. Goes to show how much the world is against female athletes.

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It's still insane to me how Rusty was capable of writing a real world scenario in which a black butch woman (or just a black woman period) would be targeted by transvestigation just for being butch and black, and yet somebow Rusty thought it was completely realistic and truthful to life that it's trans allies who transvestigate, not transphobes

Ah yes

Somebody who supports trans people is 100% more likely to transvestigate somebody and invalidate their identity even if they're a cisgender woman, totally not the group of people who had a brown woman in the Olympics under a internet firing squad because she dared to be too good at boxing, and therein it meant she had to secretly be a man because how dare she hurt the little feeble white princess she was put up against.

7 months ago

this was supposed to be a sprained ankle but ig assume she just took a nasty spill down the stairs and jaden panicked

This Was Supposed To Be A Sprained Ankle But Ig Assume She Just Took A Nasty Spill Down The Stairs And

Bonus blaire

This Was Supposed To Be A Sprained Ankle But Ig Assume She Just Took A Nasty Spill Down The Stairs And

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7 months ago

are women real :( ive been locked inside a little bird cage by they might be giants after i insulted their flood album for the past 30 years and i finally crawled out of there with my bare hands and ive forgotten so are women real

women are uh....

*checks notes*

Featherless biped

1 month ago

clap it up that's my main yall whooooo

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happy birth green girl

7 months ago

blaire is peak and why rusty can't write truly evil women

If you've found this post, I don't need to introduce Leasebound to you.

Instead, we're going to talk about the fandom.

Leasebound's fandom has a sort of Lemony-Snicket-esque schism, with Rusty's intended audience and (hilariously) the exact opposite. I've seen both sides of the Leasebound audience, and I've noticed something interesting.

...nobody hates Blaire.

Blaire Is Peak And Why Rusty Can't Write Truly Evil Women

Okay, that's a HELL of a sentence to make, and very exaggerated. I've seen 'Blaire unenjoyers' and other people treating Blaire like the Eric Cartman of Leasebound, it's an eye-catching statement that makes people read more of the text post.

But I wouldn't call it wrong, I'd give it a 'hyperbolic.'

Even on the side of Rusty's intended audience, Blaire isn't loathed. I've seen many enjoyers of Blaire who either talk about how much they went her to talk gender to them, so to say. On the flipside, the worst interpretation of Blaire is a misogynist who pushes her activism on other people, which is more or less her canon intent.

But if Blaire was as bad as Rusty Hearts portrayed her, I don't think we'd see so much art of Blaire. In fact, I put down a poll, and Blaire pretty much took the #1 spot for the 'character with the most fanart' almost instantly, beating out characters such as Jaden (who took silver), Riley, and Violet. And it pretty much sticks!

I've seen a lot of Blaire fanart from the Leasebound tag on both sides! I've seen a lot of Blaire discussion and discourse on both sides, either about the possibility of a redemption arc, a rewrite, thirsting over her, etc.

So...we can pretty much say Blaire is a bad strawman.

Strawmen are supposed to be one-note characters the main cast is supposed to be more interesting than and can fight with no pushback. Blaire is massively popular across the board in the Leasebound fandom, has discussions about her that are multi-layered, and has wonderful fanart from people that really like her.

Done. That's all.

But we're not done. We need to keep talking.

Rusty Leasebound is very good at some things. Her chapter focusing on Shez had emotional, gut-wrenching art, and there is a definite appealing quality to the way she draws things.

Some things, atleast.

But Rusty is not a great writer. There's tons of other essays and an entire discord server that can point all the flaws in her story out enough to write an epic worthy of the Mahabharata. Leasebound has largely forgotten what it is to be a mouthpiece for her political opinions, its characters are one-note and one-dimensional, she focuses on the wrong things at the wrong time, and many more that will make my fingers cry as I type this. But I want to focus of Rusty's tendencies to tell, not show.

Blaire is not evil. She's not even Maleficent or Ursula or Cruella evil. And she's no Makima either. Blaire is just a woman passionate about her beliefs, and makes the mistake of pushing them on other people. That's not evil, that's a flaw. Women cannot be perfect all the time.

But we're meant to believe she is evil. In this panel of the Actor!AU, we are TOLD by Rusty that Blaire is meant to be evil.

Blaire Is Peak And Why Rusty Can't Write Truly Evil Women

Blaire isn't evil! Come back to me when she puts a living creature in a blender, or something!

While the statement is understandable, you're using it in the wrong way! Because there is no reason for the casual Leasebound reader to ever believe Blaire is evil, the way you portray her!

(Yes, casual Leasebound readers exist. Quinty's one.)

And there's multiple occasions of this 'tell, don't show' narrative Rusty keeps pushing.

For example: Meriam.

Meriam is told to be the protective, strong mother, but I'm not sure that's entirely the case.

Meriam has serious flaws in her parenting that is never acknowledged. Shez was made to basically worry for her siblings at a young age, which sounds horrible for a young girl.

(side note: criticism of the comic has often lead to more interesting, and realistic plotlines for leasebound to include.)

She's obviously traumatised, and it shows in her parenting. When she shuns out Rissa and her boyfriend; that's not good! If Rissa wants her family by her side, she won't get it because she's marrying a man. Meriam always keeps Shez on the pedestal like she's Luisa from Encanto.

Nobody asks how's Shez. Someone help Shez.

And there's so much more!

We get snippets of Riley, a MAIN CHARACTER'S backstory from one-off panels and dialouges, but we heard the majority of it from Rusty in the comment section, Rusty confirming fan speculation, the cast page, non-canon panels, etc. Nothing in the main story!

And that just makes Riley...really boring. The most interesting part of Riley is Blaire right now, and that's REALLY bad, considering we're supposed to dislike Blaire.

Here are some more examples of Rusty telling, not showing:

Muddles:

Blaire Is Peak And Why Rusty Can't Write Truly Evil Women

Riley:

Blaire Is Peak And Why Rusty Can't Write Truly Evil Women
Blaire Is Peak And Why Rusty Can't Write Truly Evil Women

Various statuses of offscreen characters:

Blaire Is Peak And Why Rusty Can't Write Truly Evil Women
Blaire Is Peak And Why Rusty Can't Write Truly Evil Women

Blaire and many others of Rusty's characters have fallen into one of her biggest writing flaws' clutches, but it's interesting as to how fan perception and works have essentially made one of the most three-dimensional characters of the comic, aside from Jaden. And that's one of the main problems with Leasebound.

I want to end this with an open letter. I don't know if she'll read it, but if you do:

Listen to criticism, and find out what's wrong with your comic. Tune in to different parts of the fandom, even when you don't agree with them. At the heart of the war, we all share one thing: reading your comic. Don't take that for granted; many amazing, better written comics would love to have the attention you have. Your art is good. I enjoy reading Leasebound when it's about the characters, not how we're supposed to percieve them. You have something; harness it before it goes away! And at the rate Leasebound is going- it might go away really fast.

Thank you for reading. I don't have anything else to say.

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Hey, remember when a radfem accidentally reblogged a post by a non-radfem-


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