You know what everyone who asked me the question “What do you wanna be when you grow up?” I take back my answer.
My answer is no longer “I wanna be happy” or “I wanna be okay”
Tip for writing!
Descriptions! They don’t have to be so adjective heavy all the time! Sometimes it’s better to leave it to the imagination of the readers. (This works especially well when it’s in first person, though it can also be a tool to describe the characters feelings.)
Example: It has so horribly grotesque but to her, it was somehow beautiful. The way everything was put together so carefully and so precisely that no matter how inhuman it may have been, it was still, in a sense, beautiful.
Tip over
Bitch slapping is for everyone!
Glass is spiky
Fuck this shit Imma eat a jar
Not that the detective is bad at solving crimes, far from it in fact. However they’re such an idiot in literally EVERYTHING else to the point where the demon is surprised they’re not missing limbs and much more surprised they’re not dead by now. Like stupid enough to the point where he’s been kidnapped (white van, promise of candy and all), lost all of their money to scammers twice, and almost died cause they couldn’t solve 3^2.
A detective and a demon are a crime solving duo. However, the demon is bound to the detective, and only helps because the detective is an idiot.
“What do you need?”
“A hug.”
“I was talking to the dog”
“Oh……”